Definitely...
this one. Honestly, i only chose it for the variety. GET SOME MEAT IN THAT BEAT! It's sounding empty, and out of sync with your sample. Add some bass line to go along with that Kick, don't just use a Sub-Kick. Or maybe some new samples.
Keep practicing. Using samples in beats is fun, it just takes some practice to get your sample synced to your bpm, and to have your own modifications layered over nicely.
thanks :D
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You know, I actually can dig this. 55-1:01 could be a hella tight riff if you mixed some drums and bass in with it.
The problems i have with this is your sounds are a bit overpowering, you know? They're dirtier than shit, but tone it down a bit. And add some effects to the lead synth. Keep workin on it!
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Ah, I see.
Now this is much more understandable!
thanks much, I will check out your stuff!
Solid.
When i heard the intro, I envisioned this in some car commercial. (it's a compliment)
What you have is good, a nice structure to it. I especially like the way you introduced the synth to the beat. I think it has room for improvement, such as a variation of the melody, maybe even a higher-pitched synth as kind of a background synth. Also, that second saw sound you have seems a little over-powering, so maybe you could tone that down in the slightest touch.
Overall though, i think this could be great!
8/10
4/5
Lol, car commercials ftw. Yeah I'm really bad with the whole balancing of sounds thing (as you can tell when the main synth comes in). I guess the melody could do with some variation. Thanks for the review!
pro.
smooth, clear. everything mixed together well.
i could see this being professional, man. keep it up.
10/10
5/5
thanks a lot, really appreciate it!!!
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or this one?